JmX11's first

https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img193/2530/55607800.jpg
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img12/5374/58939757.jpg

Ok guys, these are my first panoramas and I wanted to know what you guys think.

Oooooh,thats a nice angle and a really nice fireball/explosion.
it looks like you will produce some nice pano's from the start.(mine wasn't even that good at the beginning)

wow cool, its a time lapse right? i love the curvature look of the lens... it kind of makes the rocket's path hard to follow, but you did it great. It works perfectly with the two side focus points on each side and then the spartan and the pillar in the center as a main focus. great job. if i had to pick one thing i didnt like though it would be the way it is so curved, but that cant be helped, it kinda adds to the cool factor as well anyways

thanks I'm glad that you guys liked it; I just finished another one and I will post it at the top of this forum too!

Don't forget to save the High Resolution ones also!

Knight Kninja wrote:

wow cool, its a time lapse right?

no KK, it's not.

Pretty good shots though. I don't like the extreme curve of the first one, but on the second one it looks really cool. I've found that extreme shots like that tend to work well when there's something in there to give it dimension. Like a laser or a rocket trail.

Nice work.

Decadence Night wrote:

I don't like the curve on the first

Thats what some other people said too, but I don't think that I can fix that.

i like the curve.if you look at it full zoom then pan,you dont notice the curve much.
i have seen many pano's and anything that makes them stand out from what i have already seen,is good in my book.
was that you sniping?he nearly took out his whole team.lol

Very nice. You better make more.

Nice work, good action shots, not bad for your first time. For some constructive criticism, I would say to lighten your images up a little bit and keep your contrast high. Also find a way to bleed out those colors, if your into the dark scene at least try and make the colors pop out or just the area you want the viewers eye to be drawn to, kind of like the explosion to the right of your img193. Good stuff though, keep it up!